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f'in hot!

choice, man. nothing but juicy goodness here. great stuff. :)

final fantasy-ish

dude, you should totally compose this in 8-bit!! :D it would sound so classically NES

http://www.unfungames.com/mariopaint/

^-mario paint composer - great program. :)

thicken up your low end. :)

you've got something in the works here that could be good. you just really need to thicken up your low end.

make the bass warmer, maybe liven it up a little instead of just the solid notes after a while. :)

add a 4/4 kick drum with more resonance and feel to it. the breakbeat kick you've got right now comes off sounding too dry for house. if you drop another deeper kick every beat and keep the other, it'll give it a nice groove. :)

EGGNOG4073 responds:

thanks for the review, and yeah i'll probably re master some parts to make the low end mo beefy and change up the note pattern.

deep, man. :)

you lost your rhythm in like 2-3 places or the flow just seemed off at parts but really good otherwise. :)

triniground responds:

thx, i'm sorry about that, i just got tired of recording so i just left it, the program was changing the time when i press stop for some reason

didn't like it at first

but around 3:30-4 minutes in I started loving it. dude, you're like the steve zai of electronic music. lol. :)

great transitions

never got boring, kept me entertained the whole way through. :)

only thing I didn't like was when you brought the crowd back in around 1:50.

great job, man.

DJ-VIZ responds:

nice glad you liked it bro

I cranked it

and rocked it like my name was ali baba.

bassline gets a little boring (before the 2:00 mark). change it up every 16 bars maybe? :)

I like when you drop at 2:00 in. :) feels like I'm playing mario's sand level! :D

lol, until the choir comes in that is. :D pretty good tune, dude. :)

INoisy responds:

Hahaha, awesome. (:

I thought about that, it does seem a little repetitive eh? I'll see if I can work in another one that flows, to change it up.

Thanks for the feedback dude, I really appreciate it. One of the most helpful things when you're trying to improve is feedback. Keep rockin' the free world. ;D

nice 2-step rhythm using synth/kick

got my head bobbin' as soon as you brought the two in together and the clap suited it nicely.

everything seems well spaced out volume-wise, subtle and well-knit.

only complaint is the melody gets a little boring. maybe use some standard verse-chorus-verse to maintain interest? :)

great stuff!

Shfty00 responds:

Thanks man, i really appreciate you getting around to leaving a review.
I glad i could get an honest opinion! =]
The volume is what i payed attention to the most,
and i didn't want to stray to far from the original thought of the song,
which i found myself doing A LOT!
(hense the repetition)

But i'll take your advice on verse-chorus-verse,
again thanks!
=D

too much distortion

way too much. :)

my head is pounding. aye.

you've got some weird compression or something on your drum track that's causing a lot of clipping and empty space within the melody/tune.

volume isn't everything, man. :) watch your levels!

ah, the oldskool days

as you said yourself, sounds like you were just messing around for the most part. but all the samples and synths bring back memories. :)

Life is fun, I like life.

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