boogie music
somethin' to shake your hips too. really nice work here. ambient and moving with a wide headspace. the same melody throughout and yet it never got boring. which means fantastic automation and rhythm progressions! :D
I don't like the one pad you use at around 3:20ish though. it's got a bit too much resonance -- makes my ears ring. not enough to lower from a 10 though. :)
top notch stuff here, man. really smooth ride the whole track through.
thanks bro!
mmm, silky and smokey
I love all the synths you chose. they're perfect. :)
however, for drum samples the closed hi-hat in the left stereo seems a bit too loud or eq'd high in the wrong spectrum.
at first I didn't like the chord structure but once you introduced the acid lead I was in love. :) very classic lounge sound.
got a little repetitive by the end though. a different melody at some point woulda been nice. :)
other than that, love it, wish I was at a lounge with martini in hand.
Hahah cool man, thanks! :D
very nicely done.
the white noise seems a bit over-compressed when you side-chain it at about 1:10 in or so when the vocals come in. the noise-crash is also a bit too loud and also compressed a bit too heavily at 1:25 in. just a fraction on both, really, but noticeable.
hmm, I've gotta agree about the bass. seems to be missing it's low-end and as a result the tune carries as a bit too top-heavy in the headspace. I wouldn't necessarily say to compress it more, maybe add a nice sub bass in another channel, with the same melodies, in order to beef up your low end. :)
pretty sick other than that though! :) nice stuff here, dude!
Great! thank you for helping me getting better ill use that for sure!
omg
my girlfriend's been listening to the original of this song for weeks. she's gonna go nuts when she hears this!
awesome work here, man. :) absolutely fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha thanks alot! loads of my friends love the original, so I decided to make a remix =D
sounds like prodigy experience
out in space!
thankls at least someone likes this, but dude if you like the prodigy than check out my original work, its uploaded, the rest of my music is way better
I think you should stop teasing...
And give us a full tune. :) Only complaint is that maybe the bass should slowly fade in. or maybe use a solid sub bass instead. the repeating bass is suited once the beat starts but seems a bit out of place prior. :)
killer loungey sound. :) I like it.
Bass not particularly my strong point, but I'm glad you like it...
great melody and nice use of the vocoder
however, your drum samples are too choppy/distorted and not that suited.
honestly, if you used some nice, rich r'n'b drum loops or samples for this it'd sound hot! :)
love the solo at 2:00 or so in. :) ahhh, man, if only the kick wasn't so farty this'd be nice. although... what the heck're you doing 2:35-3:00 in? :P lol, sounds weird.
besides those, really nice stuff here. :) very original. I liked it.
hey, thanks for the review. :) i'm aware of the way the drums sound... the whole song is supposed to sound a little clumsy and unsure as the character in the song doesn't know if his romantic intrest loves him or not. as for the 2:35-3:00 segment of the song (the second half of the solo) i was going for the contrast that the lyrics decribe, between times that the person in the song feels comfortable with his love intrest and times where it seems that she is ignoring him...you know, happy and sad and all that junk. then the only verse in the song repeats itself because it's happening to him again and again and again. get it? anyway thanks for the review man. (p.s. i'm not discrediting anything that you said. I completely understand and repect your review.)
nice harmonies! :)
great melodic progression as well!! :D just... your rhythm section that needs work. :) the beat's a little too cheesy and repetitive. serious, your melodies are hella fun, I love em. :) but the drums slay me. heh.
and at the end... why'd you cut it out two notes short? :p
yeah, I suck at drums, and I wasn't sure how to end it. Maybe it should fade out or something? Anyway, its a work in progress and I'm not sure when I'll finish it.
I'm glad you like it though!
Thanks for the review!
-Shadow
yeah, it wasn't! :D intro was having me go 'Huh?'
really fun and funky rhythm and melody afterwards. cheesy and oldskool sounding. I like it! :D
should start it at around 30 seconds in though. the bell is annoying. the doooo is more fun!
that you singing?
pretty good if it is. :)
good harmonization of your elements at the beginning. I really enjoy it up until 1:08 or so but yeah, the middle part seems weak once you get the beat going faster. seems offtime in a lot of places too, both the melodies and the beat itself.
the weird dripping sound effect gets annoying after a while too. kinda outta place.
Yah, I have alot of work still to do with it.
Nd yeah that is me singing!! I did it all on my keyboard, and I didn't align anything properly but thanks for the review! I prob will get rid of those dripping sounds.
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